Children from
Class Elm were given the task of writing a description of snowflake. An
excellent example:
Snowflakes are
pale, sparkly and creamy. They are twinkling and floaty. When it is in
your hand it is cold. They fall like spinning ballet dancers from the sky. When
they are on the ground they twinkle and shine.
I really like the line about falling "like spinning ballet dancers from the sky". I can't wait to read some more of your poetry :)
ReplyDeleteMrs I
Good.
ReplyDeleteI realy like the bit about spinning ballet dancers from the sky.
Lucia.
St-Kentigern's School